A Sarcastic Pitch!

If I made you sandwiches, would you love me plenty?
If I managed to always look younger; twenty-five or even twenty?
If I was a “good girl” would you treat me like a puppy?
Would you shower me with love and hugs; bring water to my cuppy?
If I make good coffee, if I make good tea,
Would you still choose someone else, or will it be me?
If I dressed more decently and made more female friends,
Would you promise me a happy life and better ends?

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About outlived

X-dreamer, fighter and writer... Using words to unleash the pain that eats me from the inside out, day after day!
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6 Responses to A Sarcastic Pitch!

  1. yaser says:

    very witty post, made my day:) happy holidays and see you on Facebook:)

  2. BeeBee says:

    Thank u Yaser…Happy holidays to you as well…It has been long :)I'm glad you liked it…

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  5. poetic soul says:

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